3rd Genre Project - The Victorious Race...Or Is It?

Novel Excerpt
Megan Ervin
March 11, 2014





 She is only a few yards away from the finish line where she would be named a champion.  Competing for the gold in the women’s 800-meter, she sprinted her fastest yet! Unwavering, she is so close she can taste the victory. She caught a glimpse of her opponent not far behind, slowly gaining the distance that separates their vigorously perspiring bodies. She has trained her whole life for this moment, she can’t let her opponent triumph, leaving her head hanging in shame. She must take this win.

 Now even closer, only seconds remain between her and that finish line, but also only seconds remain between her and her provoking opponent. She starts to doubt everything in her mind. No! She has no space to question her doubts now. She clears her head and sprints her fastest to the finish line. Victory belongs to her!
 Caster Semenya has now been declared the winner of the gold medal in the women’s 800-meter race. She felt marvelous after her successful victory. She honestly could not wait until the next race she was going to compete in. The achievement is showing on her face as she raises her trophy, leaving her smiling indefatigably. The crowd is staring intensely at Caster Semenya, the champ. She is soaking up the publicity, until an opponent yells out from the crowd, “Caster Semenya is not a woman, she played like a man! This race should be deemed unfair.” The audience looks in awe at the woman shouting out from the crowd then looks back at Semenya. Anger rushes over Caster Semenya’s face. She looks furious.
 Semenya is being scrutinized for something other than her athletic performance. Now Semenya is the guinea pig under the telescope of the International Olympic Committee as well as the public.




Source Citation
Curley, Ann J. "Expert: Gender Testing 'imperfect' for Female Athletes." CNN. Cable News Network, 01 Jan. 1970. Web. 23 Feb. 2014.

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